Monday 16 January 2017

The Airport

       I was at the airport, getting ready for my flight. I was heading to England to visit my parents. My flight was leaving in an hour, so I decided to stop by the food court to eat. Looking out the window I could see that the weather was dull and misty. When I went back to my seat, I had half an hour left. My eyes started to close; and I grew tired. As the weather changed, they started to call numbers up to the front to board. Blackness surrounded me. Suddenly I was awake. I looked around; but I could see no one. I had missed my flight.


2 comments:

  1. -Change "So, I started to doze off." to "My eyes began to close and i grew sleepier."

    -Change "But, suddenly I was awake. Looking around I could see no one." to "Suddenly I was awake; I looked around and saw no one."

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