Decisions
My life has been a
rollercoaster ride (an orange one,
why not) and sometimes I go right up to the top. But then out of nowhere, I
plummet back down. Within my life, I
have made decisions and some of them are not always the right ones. I spend
every waking minute contemplating that. Every day I feel as if I am getting
eaten by a..... crocodile, chomped
in half. Not getting the chance to live. The whole wide world has been toying with me, mocking me about every wrong
decision I have made. And frankly, their right.
My
rollercoaster just ended, it has just collapsed.
Overall your story is awesome, I could only find 1 mistake.
ReplyDeleteBut the last sentence you wrote My rollercoaster just ended, it's just collapsed. Change it's to it has then the sentence will make more sense.