Tuesday 11 October 2016





The Locked Cabinet

     Then the lock clicked and…I was trapped, great. It’s exactly my luck to be trapped in a cabinet! The problem is, I have a feeling I know who did this. They wanted revenge for what I did to them. It’s not like I did anything bad, I just ‘happened’ to scare them. This is revenge, locking me in a cabinet. I should focus on getting out of this cabinet first. Fine, if they want to lock me in a cabinet, lock me in a cabinet.
When I get out, they both better watch their backs.

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12 comments:

  1. HarryPotter13 October 2016 at 11:16

    i don't understand your 4th sentence.

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    1. Annabeth13 October 2016 at 11:17

      Which sentence don't you understand?

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    2. batgirl13 October 2016 at 11:21

      I don't understand what's going on in the fourth sentence to.

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    3. Anonymous17 October 2016 at 14:24

      I do not understand it either

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    4. Annabeth17 October 2016 at 18:15

      I'm sorry but I really don't know what you mean.Why does that not make sense to you??

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  2. HarryPotter13 October 2016 at 11:22

    this one " I don’t know scaring them half to death? "

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  3. batgirl13 October 2016 at 11:23

    you know when you are saying; scaring them half way to death you don't need to right scaring them again.

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    1. Annabeth13 October 2016 at 12:40

      What I mean by 'scaring them half to death' is that they want revenge for me scaring them.I ran into them and they got scared because they weren't looking.(I hope that makes sense)

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  4. 100wcbyfread.com14 October 2016 at 19:38

    Nice story

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  5. Juniper20 October 2016 at 10:53

    i think you change Fine, they want to lock me in a cabinet, lock me in a cabinet. to Fine, if they want to lock me in a cabinet, lock me in a cabinet.

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  6. 100wcbyriri.blogspot.com20 October 2016 at 11:26

    Maybe , at the end you can add " Next time ! " but that just a option it's all up to you

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  7. Scarface20 October 2016 at 11:27

    Your 4th sentence is hard to understand

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